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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 15

szaleniec1000 Dec 08, 2012 00:51

Happy birthday, sickbritkidIt's been a while since I've done anything with Hogwarts Exposed, but I don't give up that easily. Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 15 is one of those chapters that doesn't seem too bad (by Hogwarts Exposed standards) at first glance, almost to be filler before what I know is to come, but actually reading it showed that it was every bad ( Read more... )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 24 part 6

szaleniec1000 Sep 22, 2011 23:49

Remember when I said that Chapter 48 of Deserving was all the worst of the fic in one place? Well, the same is true of Chapter 24 of Hogwarts Exposed, and since Deserving looks like a masterpiece in comparison to HE... yes, this is part 6 and not the final part.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 24, still )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 15 part 2

szaleniec1000 Jun 16, 2011 03:17

It continues.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 15 (NSFW) )

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